A little while ago I
read an article about neural dust and when posting it I quipped, ‘Coming to an
SF book near you sometime soon’. Well, it seems Laura Lam was well ahead of me
on that one! I really enjoyed Shattered Minds (up to a point I’ll get to in a
moment). Here we have hackers vs the nasty corporation, mind control, a morally
ambivalent heroine and designer drugs, which had me thinking ‘modern day
Neuromancer’. The setting is Pacifica after the Upheaval. Pacifica is
California and it’s not clear what the Upheaval was – it could be some
political upheaval akin to the kind of stuff that is being talked about now
with California seceding from the USA, or it could be that the San Andreas
Fault split it off from the mainland, or a combination of both. I would have
liked to have read more about that.
Throughout this book
Lam had me ‘suspend disbelief’ so I was okay with floating buildings and hover cars. Of course I was – I love writing about weird way-out tech
myself. I was enjoying the book immensely and devouring it. But it’s strange
what kills that suspension of disbelief for me. Current science tells us FTL
travel is impossible, but I’m okay with it. But what I’m not okay with is a
silly mistake about science. When, in a Stephen Donaldson Gap book, a spaceship
slowed down upon its drive being cut I tossed it aside. Just a couple of sentences
in this book killed it for me. Near the end the heroine uses liquid nitrogen as
a weapon. That’s fine, it will cause cold burns and certainly could make body
armour frangible. However this liquid nitrogen was a corrosive acid,
apparently, and a doctor sprayed on a medication to neutralize it. I can only think that liquid nitrogen here has been confused
with nitric acid.
Shame, and such a silly easily corrected mistake. However, if you want a taste of a noir cyberpunk thriller along the lines of Neuromancer, and can read past an error like the above, I recommend this. I’ll certainly try more of her books.
3 comments:
Her Micah Grey books are very good, weird genetics and "magic".
When liquid nitrogen is exposed to air it reduces the oxygen content within, extremely dangerous in enclosed spaces. Same effect but sloppy research.
I thought not in that situation. Thrown on someone in a hall who was then dragged into a room, during a fire fight. Breath held in the hall when in fact the greater danger would have been in the room where, incidentally, a doctor sprayed a medication to 'neutralize the acid'. However, I will edit that bit out of this review - sufficiently grey to be allowable.
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