I’ve just passed the 130,000 word mark on Penny Royal II but
this last week I haven’t been hitting my target of 2,000 words a day. Generally
it’s been at about 1500 a day, but in total. I’ve probably been writing more
than 2,000 but deleting plenty too. About 1,000 words disappeared into my
BitsSF file at the start of the week. While going through the text altering
certain plot points I’ve been coming across bits that just do not need to be so
complicated and hacking them down or deleting them. A new character put in an
appearance then was quickly disappeared. And then there are those bits of text
where the motor has been idling while a clear the ice off the windscreen –
often rambling and sometimes repetitive – and they have to go too.
This slowing down process always happens with me at the end
of a book. It’s the start of moving into the editorial phase. It’s also even
more involved this time because I’m not only altering and deleting stuff in
Penny Royal II but in Penny Royal I as well. It’s all very necessary because,
near the end, I don’t want you skipping stuff because you’re thinking, ‘What the hell happened then?’ or the even worse, ‘Oh get on with it will you!’
4 comments:
Do you think going back to Penny Royal 1 is a benefit, or do you half-wish it was published (and therefore inviolate) and curse your perfectionism? :)
No, I like going back to it, Jez. I can tighten things up, have better continuity, and have no need to shoehorn in some overly complicated explanations as I grope for endings.
I did 4800 word since the 9/11/012. Which given my recent 4am starts, working every weekend in November ... and all the time I spend making fatuous comments on Facebook is pretty good.
It’s hard work this book writing stuff. I never knew until I started it a year ago, how hard it was taking the seemingly clear pictures in your head and putting them on paper.
PS: continuity. At some point I'm going to have to print it off, read it with a highlighter pen at hand, and make notes to self to rip and replace where necessary.
PPS: I'm going to have to go through it and pull the repetion where I have the same idea twice, and re-write myself.
Graeme, it slowly gets easier. Don't berate yourself for writing on Facebook or elsewhere - the more you write the easier it becomes to write. Besides my fiction I write on Facebook, twitter, on message boards, here and in a journal.
Starting out writing my problem was building up the word count and a reluctance to delete. Now I don't have so much of a problem with the former, but that reluctance is still there. Hence that BitsSF file I mentioned.
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